Ms. McDonald Contact 3/23

Contact with Ms. McDonald

Date of contact: March 23, 2018
Contact: Ms. McDonald
Reference: Writing the Materials & Methods Portion of my Paper
Discussion: I showed Ms. McDonald my materials & methods and she wrote on my paper the necessary changes that need to be made.
Conclusion: She said that I write too much like I'm writing in a diary, not a scientific research paper, and that I cannot have a preposition starting or ending my sentences. I omitted what she said I should and added the things she told me to add.

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